Duke trots over to where Joey has passed out on the lawn,
drops a slobbery tennis ball in his face and I hear from inside, others
beginning to grumble and groan awake.
I zip up after the longest whizz of my life, spot a half full
Corona on the girl’s table, tilt the cigarette butt out along with the lime and
drink a toast to another fine Saturday morning.
This Six was a response to a challenge Gita Smith threw down on the now defunkt Six Sentences site. Her challenge was to write a Six using the first line of a song for the first sentence. I chose Jim White's, Handcuffed To A Fence In Mississippi but used the line I like best rather than the very first.
7 comments:
I liked that she was sleeping sunny side down. That line made me chuckle.
I went to a party like that once. I don't think I was the girl on the table though.
Today, I wandered into your yard, looked around, peeked in a window and saw your sleeping keyboard. Your muse was standing in your kitchen looking for something to eat. You were nowhere to be seen. GET YOUR AQSS IN THE CHAIR HARRY and write another one as good as this one!
Signed,
Your Mother
One of my all-time favorites, Sanderford or otherwise.
Signed,
Envious
Thanks, Mom...and Dad? ;) I know I know, I know, my keyboard has been collecting dust. Maybe something for Halloween. :)
Good job.
Good job.
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