tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post5994506113559135193..comments2023-05-12T06:31:15.476-07:00Comments on Harry B. Sanderford: Honey I’m HomeHarryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-42711006629716815252011-04-19T11:54:32.219-07:002011-04-19T11:54:32.219-07:00Oh, sequel, please! I want to know who this unwel...Oh, sequel, please! I want to know who this unwelcome guest is and why has he done this before and why is he here now! Do tell! Terrific concept.PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07521953491880916840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-34672919382622054072011-04-14T14:42:31.727-07:002011-04-14T14:42:31.727-07:00Excellent - dark with a little nasty undercurrent....Excellent - dark with a little nasty undercurrent....this could go in so many directions (all of them good).Kevin Michaelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00703125974467675009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-90659136730062480112011-04-12T10:20:37.410-07:002011-04-12T10:20:37.410-07:00I can't wait to see where this one is going! T...I can't wait to see where this one is going! This piece raised so many questions. What's he doing here? How long has he been doing this? Why is he doing this? He seems harmless enough now, but I have a feeling that is not his true intent. The length of the piece is great, gets the meaning across and a fast read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-49725908883841972342011-04-11T04:06:47.417-07:002011-04-11T04:06:47.417-07:00Thanks alot everyone!Thanks alot everyone!Harryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09628269009060185397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-22518107047981921472011-04-10T09:43:57.158-07:002011-04-10T09:43:57.158-07:00Creepy. I suppose because I would never be intere...Creepy. I suppose because I would never be interested in sharing my body; but I guess that's not quite right. I see occasional cases where I might agree.<br /><br />Nice writing.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-53635864313695082212011-04-10T05:15:22.279-07:002011-04-10T05:15:22.279-07:00I kind of disagree with some of the previous comme...I kind of disagree with some of the previous commenters... I think this piece is great because you have made the body snatcher trope not-so-sinister, and very interesting. There have been previous visits so Beth is in no obvious danger.<br /><br />I really like it, I want to know what brought about this 'arrangement' and what the (real) hubby gets out of it. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-25367912775101823362011-04-10T05:09:57.490-07:002011-04-10T05:09:57.490-07:00Well, now that's a bit of creepiness well done...Well, now that's a bit of creepiness well done, which makes me say, "More, sir, I want more." I especially like the part about an "arrangement," which makes me want to ask a few questions. Suffice it to say, then, you really engaged me as a reader, Harry. My hat's off to you.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-7675124134049380442011-04-09T13:31:12.073-07:002011-04-09T13:31:12.073-07:00Enjoed the homey dialogue between the two, Harry. ...Enjoed the homey dialogue between the two, Harry. I'm wonderin' if this is going to take a sinister turn...Alan W. Davidsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17067022519729701245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-81026107900342620622011-04-09T12:16:24.398-07:002011-04-09T12:16:24.398-07:00(( Tim VanSant - I don't know you, but I mosey...<i>(( Tim VanSant - I don't know you, but I moseyed all the way back to Har's just to say that was one of the coolest responsorial comments I ever read. )) (Betcha whatever unknown force 'tries' to control Harry's body has broke out in a gigundus grinnn now too) ~ Absolutely*Kate</i>Kate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-2668773841698284452011-04-09T12:08:12.510-07:002011-04-09T12:08:12.510-07:00Whatever is controlling my body is giving you two ...Whatever is controlling my body is giving you two thumbs up.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-65927559588423960672011-04-09T10:45:07.324-07:002011-04-09T10:45:07.324-07:00Oooh, I like it. The concept is great and the way ...Oooh, I like it. The concept is great and the way it unfolds is terrific. Leaving the ending up to the reader is a fun way to end it. (Or perhaps you're saving the ending for another story?) :)Chuck Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14094196458632858993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-37542654088376256652011-04-09T04:32:29.275-07:002011-04-09T04:32:29.275-07:00Good bit of sinister, Harry, and as has been said,...Good bit of sinister, Harry, and as has been said, different from your usual. I think this concept, and characters could go a lot further, any future plans to expand on this?Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-11334625400388473042011-04-08T16:14:13.621-07:002011-04-08T16:14:13.621-07:00Well Har,
I may as well join the gang, agreeing w...Well Har, <br />I may as well join the gang, <b>agreeing</b> with Deanna <b>agreeing</b> with Icy <b>agreeing</b> with Mrs Webster who nailed the Stepford Husband this Twilighty Zone saga was steeped up with. <b>Agree</b> as well with the chilling Mr Wiswell noticed, but that warm shower should clear that up, but the chili for dinner? Does your shape-shifter alien robotic have the mechanics for hot spices? In the pot or in the sack? And will Beth know "that" is different?<br /><br />While we're on size or mechanics mattering, it cracks me up Adam that afullnessinbrevity remarks on your brevity . . . and yet Mr S -- you let loose so many details in da tell. You had fun in your spunky eyes wit' this one, didn't you? (What were you watching on TV last night? What did you have for dinner?)<br /><br />OH YEAH --- Where the hell is Beth's hubby and what did he do to get them all involved in this intergalatic Donna Reed show? <br /><br /><i>~ Absolutely*Kate, an inquiring mind who wants to know</i>Kate Pilarcik ~ absolutelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12430278736281847787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-16888770361888407972011-04-08T16:07:00.017-07:002011-04-08T16:07:00.017-07:00Nice awkwardness over controlling that body. Who i...Nice awkwardness over controlling that body. Who is the something or someone at the controls of that poor guy? Nicely underplayed within a domestic situation. 'Tis freaky I tell you. St.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10111660663883108862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-77179335971515971052011-04-08T14:23:27.652-07:002011-04-08T14:23:27.652-07:00I love how very short pieces can provide an entire...I love how very short pieces can provide an entire story with such brevity, where the reader can extrapolate and continue the story or fill in the previous history. <br />This is wonderfully creepy.<br />Adam B @revhappinessAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-71203202913587329782011-04-08T08:22:27.298-07:002011-04-08T08:22:27.298-07:00Way darker than your usual fare, Harry. The most d...Way darker than your usual fare, Harry. The most distinct from everything else I've read on this blog, and I think I've been around here a while. The close is almost chilling.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-183648708308882412011-04-08T06:42:01.831-07:002011-04-08T06:42:01.831-07:00Yes, very different for you Harry, and I agree wit...Yes, very different for you Harry, and I agree with Cathy and Icy - chilling, very well done!<br />I refuse to allow Shania Twain in my head for any length of time!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-35995203290789469372011-04-08T05:51:35.304-07:002011-04-08T05:51:35.304-07:00Wow, this was really different for you - and I lik...Wow, this was really different for you - and I like it! I agree with Cathy, it's such a chilling scene. Although I've also now got Shania in my head as well.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1736428277691850338.post-60278515702729479542011-04-08T04:27:49.565-07:002011-04-08T04:27:49.565-07:00Oooo, and wasn't that a chiller! LOVED IT! It...Oooo, and wasn't that a chiller! LOVED IT! It's like an alien-abducted Stepford Husband, so scary in the middle of such a normal domestic scene. Well done, Harry!<br />(Of course now I've got 'Honey I'm Home and I've Had a Hard Day' by Shania Twain playing in my head)Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.com